my eyes grow heavy..
..my breath turns rasp
life seeps away
death's within grasp
shut all my senses
nothing left to feel
my life flashes by
like it were a 35 mm reel
i see all that i've wronged
oh, how i now repent
i see those that i loved
alas, so little time we spent
if.. if only there was time
to right what was wrong
and one last kiss to my love
i wouldn't make it long
i realise i don't deserve my love
with that i've made my peace
but let me have my forgiveness
that's all i ask.. please
oh death.. dont take me now
come back when i am awake..
because while i am asleep
I'm dreaming of forgiveness.
14 comments:
WOW!
wierd
very unlike you
but the last two lines are reallllly good ... they made the entire thing worth reading :)
Poornaa : thanks
mango : I do a lot of contemplation :P
Well written. It touches on my biggest fear!
Gosh between this and your post at Contemplation... lol I am destine for some nightmares tonight! hehehe
@Helene.. thanks for the comment..
Hmm.. I really am writing some dark stuff lately.. scares me too :)
sleep well..
that was really great stuff, kal-el you touch my heart
Very dark and gloomy. Good to read, but not to remember. Are those feelings within your subconscious mind, emanating in this form?
IMpressive talent, though. Hope to see a more positive light. :)
Wow..you are a beautiful poet. Love it!
@Ramesh.. Authoress Jeanine
Thanks :)
Lovely, Beautiful & Enjoyed
That was such a touching poem...
Haiku poetry
touching poem. really touching.
@Doson.. workhard.. thoughts
Thank you
This one is really a good read. Great work. Carry on. :-)
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